Well...I'm not sure. My wife's feedback definitely did. I'm still waiting for a verdict from the first pair of human eyes (other than hers) to actually read the book. I'm a bit nervous. You see...I DID belong to a critique group years ago as a member of Pikes Peak Writers. Then Colorado Springs cancelled evening bus service, and I'm not in good enough shape to push my wheelchair fourteen miles (round-trip) to the meetings. Wish me luck!